托福 TPO-070 整合寫作主題是油棕櫚樹的栽種,內容主要在探討是否應該倡導增加種植油棕櫚樹。
【經典美語】獨家課程
〈寫作職人〉謝忠理老師親授
托福寫作 25+ 輕鬆取分
托福寫作專修班 4 堂課,帶你寫作拿到 25+
托福寫作一直停在 20 出頭?那應該是沒有掌握寫作取分秘訣。
托福考生只要具備「國中英文文法能力」,搭配「高中英文單字能力」,我們就有把握利用短短 4 堂【托福寫作專修班】課程,帶您掌握托福寫作通關密碼,穩穩拿到 25+ 的寫作分數。
短期課程,快速有效,助您以現有的英文能力,提高考試分數。
課程說明請點選下列按鈕,並歡迎預約試聽 (實體、雲端)。
The Farming of Oil Palm 油棕櫚的種植
托福 TPO 071 考題符合托福 iBT 整合寫作的標準格式:在閱讀內容部分,作者提出三種理由用以提倡增加種植油棕櫚樹。而在講課內容部分,則對此三項理由一一加以反駁。
在閱讀內容方面出現一些專業術語,但是都不難理解,因為文章都有附上補充說明。而在講課內容中,均沿用閱讀段落的術語,並沒有出現新的專業詞彙,所以不會有聽力部分遭到突襲的憂慮。
整篇難度屬於中等程度。只要能夠掌握整合寫作的聽力技巧、寫作格式、並通曉評分原則,應該能夠拿到至少 25 分。
本份考題英文原文與對應之中文翻譯整理如下。練習作答解題時若有對語意不清楚之處,請仔細查閱對照,以提升閱讀與聽力的理解能力。
Reading 閱讀內容
-
Palm oil, a liquid produced by palm trees and used for cooking and other purposes, has become very popular in recent years. As a result, the palm oil industry has had a dramatic impact on the economies and landscapes of countries in which it operates. When asked to make a recommendation about whether expanding palm oil production even more would be good or bad for the environment and the economy, many experts have stated that palm oil production has several positive effects and should be expanded.
-
First, the experts point out that palm tree farming helps preserve the world’s forests. Palm trees have a very high oil yield – far higher than that of other crops. For this reason, farming palm trees requires less land than farming other crops to produce the same economic value. Since palm tree farms require relatively little land (compared with many other crops), palm tree plantations require the clearing of smaller areas of forest than many other crops would. In other words, palm tree farms cause less deforestation and therefore have a lesser negative impact on the environment than other types of crops.
-
Second, palm oil is sometimes used to produce biodiesel, a fuel for motor vehicles. Using biodiesel in vehicle engines create fewer carbon emissions than using traditional fossil fuels does. Carbon emissions are known to contribute to climate change. Biodiesel from palm oil, when used as an alternative to fossil fuels, can help reduce this effect.
-
Third, palm oil production helps reduce poverty among small-scale farmers. About 50 percent to 70 percent of land used for farming in palm-oil-producing countries is actually cleared by small-scale, low-income family farmers. Growing palm trees is usually more profitable for such farmers than growing other crops, and it has in many cases helped improve the farmers’ standard of living.
Lecture 講課內容
提供講課內容的中文翻譯有兩個目的。首先是幫助聽力有困難的同學能夠快速且精確地了解原文的意思。而更重要的原因是,提供給練習英語口語表達的讀者訓練的素材。
由於每個人的知識範疇各不相同,因此碰到超出自己專長的領域,常常會啞口無言,無話可說。這對練習英語表達是一項非常難以克服的障礙。所以參考托福整合寫作英語原稿,既可以讓自我練習英語聽力或會話時有貼切適當的素材,同時也能學些道地的表達方式,實是一舉數得。
使用上,可以在聽完一、兩次原始音檔之後,試著一邊看中文譯稿,一邊流利、正確地用英語說出文中的內容。多次練習之後,未來自然能夠在碰到同樣主題時與人侃侃而談。
-
Now, listen to part of a lecture on the topic you just read about.
Producing palm oil may have some benefits, but it also have some very serious negative effects and should not be expanded.
-
First, it’s true that palm trees require relatively less land than some other crops. However, that doesn’t mean that palm oil farming is helping us preserve the world’s forests. You see, palm oil has become extremely desirable for use in food and cosmetics products, much more desirable than other vegetable oil. As a result, the worldwide demand for palm oil has grown very fast in recent years. To keep up with the growing demand, farmers have to clear more and more forested land. In just one country an area of forest equivalent to about seven thousand square meters is cleared very minute to make room for the palm trees. In short, the growing demand for palm oil has led to an increased rate of deforestation worldwide.
-
Second, using palm oil to make biodiesel. It’s true that using biodiesel in vehicle engines produces fewer emissions than using other fuels. However, the processes involved in growing the palms generate a lot of additional carbon emissions. To prepare land for palm tree farming, farmers have to clear the land first. That means that they burn the vegetation that existed on the land before. This includes burning plant material called peat. Peat is a type of material that stores large amounts of carbon. Burning peat creates huge quantities of carbon emissions. If you include the emissions from burning peat, using biodiesel might actually involve more carbon emissions than using fossil fuels.
-
Third, it’s true that small-scale family farmers clear a lot of land to start palm tree farms. But these small-scale farmers often don’t control the farms for very long. Large-scale farming companies often see a great commercial opportunity in palm growing. So they obtain the land and the farms for themselves and start controlling the profit. The small-scale farmers lose control and often get very little in return.
托福寫作密集速成
從入門到精通 密集系列教學 實體/雲端/一對一