《雅思寫作全球真經全詳解》分享—Television influences children's behaviour 電視影響兒童的行為

寫作真題分享

Television influences children's behaviour 電視影響兒童的行為

《Television influences children's behaviour 電視影響兒童的行為》是 Feb 2024 全球真經中收錄的雅思寫作大作文考題。問題內容如下：

參考答案

以下就將本題的各主體段論點、導論、結論內容整理出來，（節錄）分享給未來參加雅思考試的考生做參考。

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5. 主文第三段：個人主張

   雖然這兩種觀點都有道理，但我個人更傾向於後一種觀點，即兒童看電視的時間對他們的行為有重大影響。雖然兒童接觸的內容無疑會對他們的態度和行為產生影響，但過度的螢幕時間對各方面發展的累積效應也不容忽視。因此，我認為，要減輕電視對兒童行為的負面影響，應著重促進平衡的媒體消費習慣，鼓勵開展支持全面成長的各種活動。

   節制收視時間

   While both perspectives offer valid points, my own opinion aligns more closely with the latter view—that the amount of time children spend watching television has a significant impact on their behavior. While the content children are exposed to undoubtedly plays a role in shaping their attitudes and behaviors, the cumulative effect of excessive screen time on various aspects of development cannot be ignored. As such, I believe that efforts to mitigate the negative impact of television on children’s behavior should focus on promoting balanced media consumption habits and encouraging a diverse range of activities that support holistic growth.